What The World Needs Now
A Poem by
angelinmypocket
The world is in chaos with wars, famine' floods, crime and abuse. What the worldneeds now is love sweet love
© 2008 angelinmypocket
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Your words speak truth and I agree with you. We need to pray for guidance from above and love sweet love. It is very sadding all that goes on in this world. A great write, Liz!!
Posted 17 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Sad situations abound on the homefront, and we fight abroad, You have honored our soldiers well, take care. Debileah
Posted 17 Years Ago
Sad situations abound on the homefront, and we fight abroad, You have honored our soldiers well, take care. Debileah
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I like how you described the problems in a narrative tone in the first few stanzas. It made it more genuine and reached out more to the readers.
And I agree with you fully, Elizabeth. Love doesn't seem easy to come by these days.
Great write. Keep it up.
Loves,
Raven
Posted 17 Years Ago
I like how you described the problems in a narrative tone in the first few stanzas. It made it more genuine and reached out more to the readers.
And I agree with you fully, Elizabeth. Love doesn't seem easy to come by these days.
Great write. Keep it up.
Loves,
Raven
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 8, 2008
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angelinmypocket Whitewright, TX
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