very expressive; couched within an historical tone. the imagery and metaphor worked together so nicely and surrounded the phrase like a flowing river. the presentation was really good. I wish I could figure out how to put the graphic in---just a really nice write! thanks for including it in the challenge.
Posted 17 Years Ago
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