Heaven's Tears

An imaginary description of how tear can wash away stone.

Reviews

[Tovli]

very expressive; couched within an historical tone. the imagery and metaphor worked together so nicely and surrounded the phrase like a flowing river. the presentation was really good. I wish I could figure out how to put the graphic in---just a really nice write! thanks for including it in the challenge.

[Lizanne]

How I love this poem. Yes, I agree with you there is no such thing as coincidence. I believe everyone is brought into our life for a reason. It does not mean that God put everyone there. Some come to test us. As I am sure you know. i would hate to say how many times I have probably failed the test. Back to the poem, you have an amazing talent and I am going to put this in my favorites. Heaven has cried its' tears for thousands of years. The whole thing is so visual. A magnificent mural of the beginning till now. You want to know another amazing thing. I love unicorns, even have a large white unicorn head that play that song. It is my theme song. Don't know why, but I love it. Keep writing those beautiful poems. The angels cried in joy, because we became friends.

[Closed profile]

Very beautiful
I was drawn into these words you wrote.

Especially the first part of it I loved, I love nature deeply, so this touched my heart the most.

But, the last part was wonderful too and I just could not stop reading

You truly have a talent for writing

[Ladysue]

Liz, this was so beautiful. Extremely profound and expressed just so perfectly. The is no bounds to the depth of your insight. The lines below are so creative with great imagery and express the feeling of betrayal exquisitely to their preceeding lines.
Heaven has cried it's tears for thousands of years
And where great mountains used to stand,
A phenomenal write.

[Michael X]

this is majestic in form, insightful in rendering reflects wisdom
from the heart, its beautiful as only a True poet can capture,
stunning really the wording depth, Imagery! takes the
reader to the moment of happening, thank you for
sharing such talent, take care, mike

[Morning Song]

WOW oh WOW. Getting up on my old table so I can clap so loud you can hear me clear over there.

Oh, Liz, I just LOVED this!!! Wish you could see me smiling.

You took the challenge phrase, and brought us a true work of art.

And I'm still clapping.

Hugs...
Jeri

[Helena]

Oh Liz...this was a masterpiece! It was poignant and beautiful and moved me to tears. Very well written, graphics awesome and suited your poem to a "T".....Well done my dear friend! Thank you for keeping the dream alive this week with Tovli ~ Hugs ~ Helena

[Norma Duncan]

EXCELLENT!!! You did great with the graphic, so beautiful and the music so perfect. I am so impressed. I just don't
take time to try to learn I guess.
Love,
Norma

[Lydia Shutter]

Liz, your presentation here is just gorgeous!
"The rain is only heaven's tears" what a lovely thought this is....your words explain the mysteries of life in beautiful fashion. Rhyming is perfect! Great job. Lydia

[Badmac (Brenda )]

Liz
what a beautiful write for Tovli's phrase
I have yet to do one
I am trying to think of the owrds to use her phrase.
I loved this you have done an awesome job!
I also see starlite is still messing up.

Love Brenda