Come September

A Short Story That Borders On The Etheral.

 

Reviews

[God's Little Whispers B..]

This is sheer beauty Liz. You just have talent screaming to go onto the written pages. I think there
is nothing that you can't write about and do it to perfection. I am just so impressed with each and
every single write of yours. I am your number 1 fan...smiles...well, that is where I chose to put
myself...I am sure I have many ahead of me that have known you and your beautiful use of words
before me. God bless you Sis...you so truly are just that. I love you...Mary Anne ^j^ GLW's

[Lizanne]

I absolutely love this story. A magical spot in the midst of a forest. What better place to meet an angel. This was so well written that I felt drawn into your story. I became the third party observer. You have a powerfully descriptive writing style. I could feel fall in the air and smell the scents that go with it. Magnificent!!

[Michael X]

the wisdom of an angel indeed, this is exactly an ethereal story that exudes a surreal
lanscape of astral design, contemplating, creating a world where nymph's, fairies,
celestail beings, angels, and all that exists in the imagination, this is touching and
beautifully written with an absolutele knowledge that flows from your blessed pen,
which blesses the reader in return, the mertaphorical changes of the season aspect
is heartwarming, the ambience is soothing, this is scripted as a surrendering of the
souls artisticness, you are able to write with loving clarity ,powerfully beautiful! mike

[Deborah Shepard]

beauty sis , loved the story felt I was walking through the clouds time standing still

[Morning Song]

I love this story, Liz. And I really loved this line:

"The trees, the birds...possibly the little wood nymphs...unless I miss my guess they are here."

It's as if he were trying to open your eyes to what lies just beyond your existance. And yes, I'm thinking he could be destined to walk by your side throughout your journeys of life, too.

Very original and creative take on the challenge phrase. Bravo.

Hugs...
Jeri

[angelina neves]

lovely story! :)

[Tovli]

awesome story. I loved the picture as well. the story read very well, like a micro-romance. you may have discovered a new genre. the story/prose-poem touches the soul of the reader. very well done. tovli

[Norma Duncan]

I really really enjoyed this story Liz. So interesting and mystic. Thanks for letting me know that you are posting here.
Love,
Norma

[Helena]

Wow Liz! What a lovely little story! So well penned and may I say well punctuated and beautifully typed! It had all the hallmarks of a good story.....very descriptive, good story line and you weaved the challenge phrase so beautifully in at the end! BRAVO!! Loved your graphic too! Can I snag it?? lol. Thank you for Keeping the Dream Alive! ~ Helena

[Badmac (Brenda )]

Liz
I loved this
gave me chills when you said he was not of this world.
then when he said he had to go
my heart broke
just when you thought you found a good friend
he had to leave.
sometimes life works that way I guess
still hurts though.
what a great entry for the dream challenge.
did you enter this in helena dream challenge.??

Love Brenda