"sail a silver schooner through the milky way
And into a sea of stardust lagoon.
And land upon my island of dreams"
How perfectly lovely, and what a shame one has to wake up after that lovely Adventure in the Land of Butterfly Dreams. Enchantment, beauty and sweetness all bundled up in this exquiste write! Well done Liz! Hugs ~ Helena
wistfully enchanting. the wording, graphic, detail vibrance, colorful imagery
the magical blissful feelings of being carried upon a summer's breeze, this
is beautifull done and creates a freeing feeling in the readers heart, you
know how to pen dreams into your words, comining loveliness and stardust,
the wording is sublime in detail, the perspectives touch one with happiness
liz, your talent shines in this wonderfull written work of creativity, mike
"sail a silver schooner through the milky way
And into a sea of stardust lagoon.
And land upon my island of dreams"
How perfectly lovely, and what a shame one has to wake up after that lovely Adventure in the Land of Butterfly Dreams. Enchantment, beauty and sweetness all bundled up in this exquiste write! Well done Liz! Hugs ~ Helena
Posted 17 Years Ago
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I have enjoyed your poetry very much this morning. It has encouraged me to try harder to learn to place graphics and music on them.. I see that it can be done with style and beauty.
love,
Norma
What better way to put a smile on my face to greet the dawning of a brand new day, than to read something THIS magical? I'm grinning REAL big, Liz. And I'm thanking you for putting the sparkle in my day.
Awww sweetie....This is just perfection and so much like you. Absolutely breathtaking.
I am so humbled by your poetry and could just get lost in each and every one of them.
Blessings to you Sis. Mary Anne ^j^
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