Angels

Angels

A Poem by light and ashes

I wish that I could stand upon Time, like the Angels do, to be so lofty and full of light.
I envy their wings. I envy their peace.
I envy their time with God.

© 2023 light and ashes


Author's Note

light and ashes
taken on a Neapolitan back alley.

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Though I don’t believe in any God, I understand what envy is like…. And it can be very frustrating at times…you desire to be someone else or to be in another more comforting place …. It’s a wish that we all have at some time or another…or we envy certain people for various reasons….
Short and to the point
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Betty, for understanding.
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You’re very welcome!
Best, B



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.. what a delightful thought you have left me to ponder upon .. quite possibly all day since I've got nothing better planned until Monday :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Great! Awesome! Thank you.
Neville

1 Year Ago


You are so very welcome L&A .. N :)
I hope he does exist and is the all-forgiving God as expressed in religions...

because so many of us make mistakes in our lives but in ways try so hard to make up for them...

a life of atonement...and maybe someday, wings.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Though I don’t believe in any God, I understand what envy is like…. And it can be very frustrating at times…you desire to be someone else or to be in another more comforting place …. It’s a wish that we all have at some time or another…or we envy certain people for various reasons….
Short and to the point
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Betty, for understanding.
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

You’re very welcome!
Best, B
You should write a part 2. Where the angels envy you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

That is a cool concept, but honestly, I don't see why they would.

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Added on April 28, 2023
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