An Aquarian's Dream

dream logic is not logic at all. Or is it??

I sailed into a dream one night on a river,

made of moonbeam's and starlight.

I did not know what it was I was seeking

or if I was seeking anything at all.

I just knew that I wished upon a star,

that my dreams would take me this far.

If I were but a dream within a dream,

I knew not,

and neither did I care.

For now, I was here, 

within my dream,

being carried by the love of the stars.

I knew not, whether I were but a dream within a dream,

and neither did I care.

Reviews

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Whimsical and the tone is consistent from start to finish... lovely piece.

[light and ashes]

Thank you so much..

[Tasi83]

Great poem! Congratulations!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

That is truly beautiful
Thanks I love it

[light and ashes]

Thank you, I am glad.
I appreciate it.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Yes loved it

[W. Barrett Munn]

I felt this way back in 1970 while listening to Strawberry Fields Forever and watching my hand breathe while lying in my door room bed.

LIving is easy with eyes closed, misunderstanding all you see.
Lovely, LA. Brought back both good times and bad. But good for you.

Winston

[light and ashes]

I love The Beatles. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

[Chris Shaw]

My mother’s birth sign was Aquarius. Thank you for this poem. As I read it, my mother smiled at me from the other side. May your dreams sustain you in dark days as well as good my friend in poetry.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I wonder if any of us every knows what we are really seeking...and yet most of us find it somehow.
j.

[light and ashes]

Maybe we do....maybe we do not, thank you, Jacob.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Light… we will meet in a Dream where Stars are gathered by a River.,, Be Brave and Dream. gently, Pat

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

These words are the stuff of poetry and where we draw inspiration for our art. Though I must admit at times it is easy to get lost in these dreams. To fall from one into another wishing to never awake. A lovely piece of writing.