Blue

Blue

A Poem by light and ashes
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an ode to the color blue

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Blue is the color that runs through my soul. 
It is a river running long and true.
An ocean mysterious and deep.
No one truly knows what it holds.

Blue is always my favorite color.
Whether I am happy or sad.
Blue is the color of my soul.

It understands me, 
and I understand it's depths.
It captivates my gaze.
It all but makes my heart stop.

The red flames burn hot, but not as hot as blue flames.
Blue is the color of true seduction.

© 2024 light and ashes


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Blue is my favorite color, and I think it always will be. It’s haunting, but can be so many shades. I love the way you captured the color here, and if you could describe a color this poem could work. It’s just so detailed and wonderfully written. And I love how touched on the more fiery side of blue- people tend to forget blue fire is the hottest. Blue is such a deep color, and thank you so much for sharing this beautiful piece!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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light and ashes

3 Years Ago

Thank you!



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Blue is mine as well but purple is do beautiful...the fire in blue deep within you the hue of love if only you knew....wonderful words like always🌹🌹🌹🌹

Posted 3 Years Ago


My favorite color has always been purple, so if souls really existed and they had colors, mine would be lavender or mauve for sure. :))
I love the painting and how you called blue the color of seduction, because blue fires are the hottest.

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review.
I think that's lovely.
Souls definitely exist. read more
Moonie

3 Years Ago

Why do you think the essence of our being is different from the physical being itself?
light and ashes

3 Years Ago

That's a really great on the mark question.
I guess I just feel like there must be more to u.. read more
Blue is a soothing calm color
Like the sea..waves of beauty
lovely poem so we'll expressed

nice work


Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

thank you.
Very lovely how you explained the intensity and the power of just one thing, Blue. Very well done

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
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Nicely done. Each detail makes sence. Thanks for being my friend 😃!

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

You're welcome :) thank you for your review.
Hello my friend. I like the color blue too. The color of the sea. Very nice use of description and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

I certainly appreciate your reviews, thank you.
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my dear friend.
Blue is often associated with sadness and cold, but for me it will always remind me of a cloudless sky in the heat of summer. Very nicely penned. My favourite colour is purple, but blue is up there too. Have a good weekend.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

That's cool, purple is close to blue. Thank you for your review.


You sure know your blues ................. tis my fave colour too .................. makes me wonder what else we have in common besides scribbling ..................... Seasons best to ya my friend .. N :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

Who knows :) Have a blessed day.
Blue has always been my favorite color. It even affects the way I eat. ha Blueberries, blueberry pie...

When I was younger I had a set of drums that were blue sparkle. I still dream of them every once in a blue moon. ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

Cool! There really is something about the color.
Very interesting read by the way you repeat the color blue for sadness as well as passion, true seduction…. I love to watch blue flames in a fireplace; that color is mesmerizing .. I like you choice of words and color to describe your moods.
Best
Betty

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on November 20, 2021
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