Blue
A Poem by
light and ashes
an ode to the color blue
Blue is the color that runs through my soul.
It is a river running long and true.
An ocean mysterious and deep.
No one truly knows what it holds.
Blue is always my favorite color.
Whether I am happy or sad.
Blue is the color of my soul.
It understands me,
and I understand it's depths.
It captivates my gaze.
It all but makes my heart stop.
The red flames burn hot, but not as hot as blue flames.
Blue is the color of true seduction.
© 2024 light and ashes
Featured Review
Blue is my favorite color, and I think it always will be. It’s haunting, but can be so many shades. I love the way you captured the color here, and if you could describe a color this poem could work. It’s just so detailed and wonderfully written. And I love how touched on the more fiery side of blue- people tend to forget blue fire is the hottest. Blue is such a deep color, and thank you so much for sharing this beautiful piece!
Posted 2 Years Ago
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what a beautiful tribute to your favorite color- in so many ways. You have inspired my write a poem about my favorite color(s) as well- thank you for this
Posted 1 Week Ago
what a beautiful tribute to your favorite color- in so many ways. You have inspired my write a poem about my favorite color(s) as well- thank you for this
1 Week Ago
Cool...hope it turns out well,
you're welcome.
Powerful work. Great job.
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
Powerful work. Great job.
3 Weeks Ago
Thank you, Thomas. It was thoughtful of you to stop by.
Time can be colored. Color that s**t happy.
You write well, that s**t can grip a human.
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
Time can be colored. Color that shit happy.
You write well, that shit can grip a human.
3 Weeks Ago
well, thank you..
3 Weeks Ago
it was my pleasure
3 Weeks Ago
Are you certain?
3 Weeks Ago
not anymore. Why? Was it??
3 Weeks Ago
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3 Weeks Ago
They're alright.
3 Weeks Ago
strange. lol.
3 Weeks Ago
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3 Weeks Ago
Sorry for being "strange".
3 Weeks Ago
No big deal..
3 Weeks Ago
modest mouse makes objectively good music anyway.
the way you described blue color is your favorite, that's really appreciable and good writing though!
best wishes
Abhishek
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
the way you described blue color is your favorite, that's really appreciable and good writing though!
best wishes
Abhishek
3 Weeks Ago
kind, thank you.
3 Weeks Ago
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Wow, truly pulled me in. This is a great treatise on that color blue, aqua, azure... Finding warmth in the coolest color. Then again it is the coolest. Not cold, like black. Outer space. No, there is light here and a beautiful hue!
Posted 3 Weeks Ago
Wow, truly pulled me in. This is a great treatise on that color blue, aqua, azure... Finding warmth in the coolest color. Then again it is the coolest. Not cold, like black. Outer space. No, there is light here and a beautiful hue!
Tis said that one should have a mountain - green, to cleanse the soul; the sky and water - blue, to refresh the spirit. In those one has the world. Your blue encloses thought in a myriad directions. Beautiful
Posted 4 Weeks Ago
Tis said that one should have a mountain - green, to cleanse the soul; the sky and water - blue, to refresh the spirit. In those one has the world. Your blue encloses thought in a myriad directions. Beautiful
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4 Weeks Ago
I love that, thank you, emma.
Dark blue is my favorite color no matter what mood I'm in.
Posted 1 Month Ago
Dark blue is my favorite color no matter what mood I'm in.
1 Month Ago
(smiles) cool..
Blue is the colour of throat chakra ...need more expression...don't hold onto things needing to be said 💙
Posted 11 Months Ago
Blue is the colour of throat chakra ...need more expression...don't hold onto things needing to be said 💙
I love the way this poem is presented! The language is not flowery, and right on spot, and the words flow really well. Great poem!
Posted 1 Year Ago
I love the way this poem is presented! The language is not flowery, and right on spot, and the words flow really well. Great poem!
1 Year Ago
Thank you so much!
I think of all of the colors, blue is the most calming and alluring though personally I lean towards green but...you can't make green without blue. : ) Nicely done, I like how this felt to read.
Posted 1 Year Ago
I think of all of the colors, blue is the most calming and alluring though personally I lean towards green but...you can't make green without blue. : ) Nicely done, I like how this felt to read.
1 Year Ago
Fantastic, thank you.
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Added on November 20, 2021
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