The Girl

The Girl

A Poem by light and ashes

The girl is a mess of well sewn imperfections.

© 2021 light and ashes


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I believe my good friend. Our imperfections make us special. Very nice use of words my friend. I did like and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


I'm not good with one liners so i remove me review to give this some thought.
A girl just not every girl just lost in pass relations, where she could ever see prefect because if you believe in her you're the mess.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Powerful sentence. Who says a sentence can't be a poem in itself. tyfs Keep up the good work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

Thank you :)
You succinctly and elegantly capture the idea of "perfectly imperfect" here.

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Garrett :)
Brilliant words.
That is what being human is about

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

Yep.. thank you.
You gave me patchwork, stitched loosely together. I felt vulnerability here. Take care.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

Aren't we all a mess, Christine?
Thank you for your review.

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Added on January 7, 2021
Last Updated on December 18, 2021


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