Murder

I witnessed a murder.

I witnessed the murder of my own soul. 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and the question is...did this witness come forward?

a lot said but also not said with this one sentence.
j.

[light and ashes]

She is beginning to come forward....thank you for your intelligent and insightful review.

[Alexandra G.]

You got me thinking... amazing how a single sentence can put our minds to work! Great expression, deep, precise and short. Amazing!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An interesting sentence to get the reader intrigued and thinking. If the protagonist witnessed the murder of their own soul then they live on without it, perhaps a deciple of the devil.

[Sami Khalil]

The death of the soul here is metaphorical. Means a lot to you. Might be your old self. Renewal of the new. Leaving old ways to embrace the new ones. Masterful.

[Coyote Poetry]

When the soul died. What is left? To see the death of the soul. Leave us dead-man walking. Thank you for sharing your powerful and worthwhile words.
Coyote

[light and ashes]

Thank you Coyote for your review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Poet.

[Ken Simm.]

This takes an impressive amount of literary skill.

[light and ashes]

Wow, thank you Sir.

[Amanda Moubarak]

few words that express a lot. well done

[light and ashes]

Thank you :)

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Amazing- powerful- but as long as you witness the rebirth- take it out of someone else’s hands take it back - learn to learn be again - it’s a important lesson that never passes until we become masters of our own spirit and soul- well done 🌹

[light and ashes]

Amen! Thank you so much for such an awesome review!