A Little Devil

A Little Devil

A Poem by Light and ashes
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about the nature of Man

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They say that you should never show sympathy for a devil....
I know, that they are probably right,
But I also know that
there is a little devil
in every man
and woman,
On Earth.

© 2024 Light and ashes


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Sympathy for the Devil, was a song by the Rolling Stones. Some people do have a Doctor Jekyll side and Mr. Hyde in them.

Posted 3 Days Ago


Yep, there's a devil living in all of us.
really enjoyed this write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


So True! A devil on one shoulder, an angel on the other. Loved this :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Light and ashes

2 Months Ago

thank you.
i say do show sympathy! how else are them poor little devils going to heal?
also, glad you included women - just for the sake of equality and fairness.
appreciate it.
:)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Light and ashes

2 Months Ago

It really shouldn't be needed.. Mankind, should be enough. But, I felt it wasn't clear enough.
Twilight

2 Months Ago

It makes it complete, by referring to men and women; simply because all humans sin. It's sometimes e.. read more
Yes, in all of us. Well written. ~Jim

Posted 2 Months Ago


Light and ashes

2 Months Ago

thank you.
Fantastic work. powerful and poignant.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Light and ashes

2 Months Ago

thank you.
good observation. he is devious, gets around, knows our weak spots and is convincing as a liar.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Light and ashes

2 Months Ago

He is a liar, even when he speaks the truth..
Thank you, for the "observation."
Light and ashes

2 Months Ago

Thank you for your review.
Very true, and in the Christian faith too, people have complete free will; to be good or bad. Although, genuine repentance is also part of the deal; for Christians in hope of seeking salvation.

I'm not Christian myself, despite years of such influence in my upbringing; and have considered myself as agnostic for many years. No doubt, as an atheist though; I would have been bad more often.

Over the decades, one lives and learns.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Light and ashes

2 Months Ago

Thank you for your input.
Twilight

2 Months Ago

As you said, there is a little devil in all of us. But, there is a scale; of course lol. People can .. read more
Light and ashes

2 Months Ago

I agree...
Indeed! Perhaps we could focus on entertaining the ‘shoulder angel’ to avoid the little devil… just a passing thought…

Posted 2 Months Ago


Light and ashes

2 Months Ago

:) thank you.
redd Brick Keshner

2 Months Ago

Welcome 👍🏻
That's wonderful saying we loose our innocence long time back ... like centuries before.. ah during caveman?..
The little devil peeks out and gives us devilish smile, maybe it's selfishness or our own of living...
Hope we all don't let out that devil freely... great write and metaphor... :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


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