Fall

Fall

A Poem by light and ashes
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written in 2022/2023

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Fall


Soon the leaves will be changing their color and falling.

What dies will be reborn again into an entirely new season.

The leaves will make good compost for a richer soil.

If only my thoughts would fall to the ground and die in the same way.


© 2024 light and ashes


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As someone who overthinks, your final line resonated with me. Those thoughts just keep rustling in the wind. Over and over. Nice meaningful brevity light and ashes. Plenty of imagery too. All good wishes.

Posted 1 Month Ago




I sense a sure and certain sadness here but feel there should be a celebratory undertone emerging before the birth of a new spring .. a captivating little gem .. neville

Posted 1 Month Ago


light and ashes

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Neville. I appreciate your stopping by and your review.
Leaves helping future leaves...like grandparents making way for their children and their children's children.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


light and ashes

1 Month Ago

Nice way of putting it..
thank you, Jacob.

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Added on November 18, 2024
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