Submerged

Here, I am, still submerged in these waters.

The waters of my emotions.

When I was little, I always thought that,

eventually, they would drown,

but, now, it's obvious that they never will,

but, now, I'm starting to think, that, maybe,

it's not so bad, here,

after-all.

Reviews

[schlanks]

With enough time, what was once ice cold numbs to feel lukewarm regardless of temperature. Perhaps adjusting to the surroundings of your emotions is enough. Very thoughtful and emotional in a short read.

[Amy R]

The poem likely aims to highlight the significance of acknowledging one's emotions and discovering comfort within them, indicating that acceptance can foster tranquility, even amidst chaos.

Thanks for sharing such raw emotion filled poem.
-Amy

[Pete]

sometimes they're all we have amidst the turmoil they bring. they help us to decide who we really are and that's not a bad thing but treading their water is not easy.

[Ken Simm.]

Trust me it is better submerged.

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. Beautiful imagery.

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[jacob erin-cilberto]

Emotions are really okay to feel...and it is like how people say we cannot die in our dreams...emotions will not kill us but they could make us stronger as we swim with the hurt and the pain...the strokes get stronger.
j.

[Arundass TP]

Try to swim faster out of emotions. Good poem

[light and ashes]

I have. It doesn't work.
Thanks, anyway.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Light... our being is always surviving... with pain and sometimes happiness.
Suddenly, I am overwhelmed with pain... and it always goes away... but we never know. We hope to grow and experience more of the Beauty we have to explore. p.s. your poem is perfect for me today. softly, Pat

[light and ashes]

I'm glad..hoping that is a good thing,
and that you are well.

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank you Light… aging comes with Pain, but some days are Care-free. Amen .. Pat