Submerged

Here, I am, still submerged in these waters.

The waters of my emotions.

When I was little, I always thought that,

eventually, they would drown,

but, now, it's obvious that they never will,

but, now, I'm starting to think, that, maybe,

it's not so bad, here,

after-all.

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

Trust me it is better submerged.

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. Beautiful imagery.

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[jacob erin-cilberto]

Emotions are really okay to feel...and it is like how people say we cannot die in our dreams...emotions will not kill us but they could make us stronger as we swim with the hurt and the pain...the strokes get stronger.
j.

[Arundass TP]

Try to swim faster out of emotions. Good poem

[light and ashes]

I have. It doesn't work.
Thanks, anyway.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Light... our being is always surviving... with pain and sometimes happiness.
Suddenly, I am overwhelmed with pain... and it always goes away... but we never know. We hope to grow and experience more of the Beauty we have to explore. p.s. your poem is perfect for me today. softly, Pat

[light and ashes]

I'm glad..hoping that is a good thing,
and that you are well.

[Patricia Wedel]

Thank you Light… aging comes with Pain, but some days are Care-free. Amen .. Pat

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow, I love this right so simple but write to the point, yes no smoke for the fire is not out yet because afterwards its not bad.. Thank for sharing this insight that makes us think if we got it right. Good write.

[Perdition]

I am always gentled by these reflective perceptions and outpourings in poetry regarding these redemptions and revelations we experience; yours no less. A remarkable statement and a glorious page turned from all life worth living. Learning to swim and exist with our deeper waters, day by day... Beautiful!~