Swallowed the Sun

or something like it?

I swallowed the Sun.
It tasted salty and chewy,
like Taffy.

Reviews

[Linda Guittar]

I love it! I feel it :) ;)

[light and ashes]

made me smile to read this..thank you.

[Desert Knave]

Very cute in its imagery. I like it. ~Jim

[light and ashes]

Thank you!

[Thomas W Case]

Fantastic work, very happy.

[light and ashes]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

I need a warm Sunny day. Here in Michigan. Zero degrees and snow. I am waiting for the days of Spring. I like taffy too. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Davidgeo]

If we tasted with our eyes, I wonder what our sky would taste like.

[light and ashes]

blueberry sorbet..

[Patricia Wedel]

The best description of Salt Water Taffy… after spending my younger years in the Summer at Atlantic City Ocean Resort ,,, where on the Boardwalk we enjoyed Taffy in flavors of fruit, Charming poem that wraps my Heart 💜 in memories. tenderly, Pat. Happy New Year 3024….

[light and ashes]

Happy New Year, 2024.
Happy to know that my poem brought happy memories to your mind.
Take care.

[emmajoygreen]

I smiled at the brevity but now wondering if there's a long tome hidden in the spaces!

[Arundass TP]

Loved you three line short work. It has some meaning hidden and I am thinking about it.

[light and ashes]

Honestly, I'm not sure what it means, or if it has any meaning at all.
I am a fan of surrealism, and it just came to me.

[Matthew Kult]

I always thought it would be more cinnamon like. Go figure taffy.

With love,

Matthew

[light and ashes]

lol, thank you.