A Palace with Wings

A Palace with Wings

A Poem by light and ashes
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inspired by the artwork

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I soared on the 

wings of Polaris to 

a place of timeless 

and immense 

beauty.

I soared into 

another world of 

starlight to a place 

of dreams.

There I discovered 

a castle with walls 

made of 

moonbeams,

carried by a moth's wings. 

It was surrounded by the most precious gems picked out by God's own hand.

© 2023 light and ashes


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Stunning visuals. It has a delicate fantasy feel. Creative storytelling.

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Thrilled to receive a review from you, duff! Thank you!
This is beautiful and visually rich. Well written!

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
Your posted artwork is truly inspirational light and ashes. Your spiritual lines took me on a journey and how beautiful that journey was. Pleased to have stopped by today. Wonderful imagery.

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

God bless you, Chris Shaw.
Beautiful Work light, very ethereal and grounded in your intense spiritual visons. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Thank you :)
Sounds like a mystical experience, or maybe even a near death experience. How nice it would be to do this when needed.

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Thank you, John.
Mesmerizing, I would have to say. You held me attentively in the palm of your hand.

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much.
Very enchanting and beautiful. This is a magical world you have created

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on February 11, 2023
Last Updated on February 12, 2023


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