bright angel

bright angel

A Poem by light and ashes
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an angelic presence

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bright angel,
shining like the Sun,
sparkling like the fresh morning dew or the early morning Sun shining off the snow.
You have been reborn in blood and fire,
like a new born babe breathing it's first breath.
You light up the world with your heart of gold.
bright angel,
beautiful saint,
loving and devoted even up until death.
You sacrifice your consecrated heart on a platter,
beneath the alter,
and say that this is their sacrifice.

© 2022 light and ashes


Author's Note

light and ashes
because sometimes I enjoy writing the positive

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Beautifully expressed ;-] loved it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! .......
The light that warms those it touches, she shines, she sacrifices, and all the while takes no credit for any of the good that follows in her wake. Beautifully crafted.

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

She is one higher than I.....thank you.
You bring what nobody would think, I have to read your work because I'm not sure what your saying but it's not a bad thing I enjoy the puzzle and have to figure the meaning, that's what makes it fun reading.
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

That is a high compliment, in my opinion. Thank you so much.
Mauricio Montoya

1 Year Ago

You have a way to write where when we read, get it right I love reading because I better think twice.. read more
light and ashes

1 Year Ago

lol love your comments..thank you so much.

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Added on December 19, 2022
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