bright angel

an angelic presence

bright angel,

shining like the Sun,

sparkling like the fresh morning dew or the early morning Sun shining off the snow.

You have been reborn in blood and fire,

like a new born babe breathing it's first breath.

You light up the world with your heart of gold.

bright angel,

beautiful saint,

loving and devoted even up until death.

You sacrifice your consecrated heart on a platter,

beneath the alter,

and say that this is their sacrifice.

Author's Note

because sometimes I enjoy writing the positive

Reviews

[Weeping willow]

Beautifully expressed ;-] loved it.

[Light and ashes]

Thank you so much! .......

[willweb]

The light that warms those it touches, she shines, she sacrifices, and all the while takes no credit for any of the good that follows in her wake. Beautifully crafted.

[Light and ashes]

She is one higher than I.....thank you.

[Mauricio Montoya]

You bring what nobody would think, I have to read your work because I'm not sure what your saying but it's not a bad thing I enjoy the puzzle and have to figure the meaning, that's what makes it fun reading.
Thank you for sharing.

[Light and ashes]

That is a high compliment, in my opinion. Thank you so much.

[Mauricio Montoya]

You have a way to write where when we read, get it right I love reading because I better think twice before I comment.

[Light and ashes]

lol love your comments..thank you so much.