Cigarette

Just like a cigarette you burn me up and burn me out until all that's left is the nasty gritty part that nobody wants.

Author's Note

This was written about my family.

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

seems someone has blown too much
smoke your way..and caused a complete
burnout for you..brief and to the point
poem well penned

[Light and ashes]

Thank you...

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

About a spouse or ? Anyway whatever it is , its a sensational poem in brevity. Kudos!!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too

[Light and ashes]

No, not about a spouse... unfortunately, I have a family of toxic people.