The Dawn

My midnight that was as black as an abyss 

will rise into a brilliant dawn 

like a phoenix being reborn from the ashes.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is the third poem I've read today that refers to a Phoenix rising up from ashes (love that imagery!) I do believe there might be a trend among our collective consciousness! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[light and ashes]

I think so....
2020 was a really rough year for most of us..
for me it was years before it as well..
I think we are in need of a rising from the ashes and I hope we do..
God bless.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[Kelly Scheppers]

May this be our mantra for welcoming in the new year! Warmest of wishes and light to you in Tennessee.

[light and ashes]

Thank you so much sweet lady! :)

[VJWild]

I love these short poems that are packed with a punch!

[light and ashes]

Thank you!

[Midnight Baron ⚜&..]

Simple and elegant. The message is quite clear for all and tells quite a spectacular one. I look forward to more. Write on, my friend!

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After every black night dawn is the perfect answer to mitigate the dark. A beautiful poem of hope...

[light and ashes]

Thank you, Dreamer.

[Danny Metcalfe]

This a lovely poem.
Every morning we are re-born.
It feels very much Japanese in tone.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

And hopefully we all will be able to rise with it.

[light and ashes]

Thank you Jacob.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful and powerful words shared my friend. I believe we are reborn often in a life. We change faces and we can become wiser. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote