Fall or Fly?

Fall or Fly?

A Poem by light and ashes

Will she fall or fly?
Either way she will have to take the plunge and find herself immersed in the unknown.

© 2020 light and ashes


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light and ashes
Inspired by the picture

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Yesssss! The picture itself begs the question, is she falling or flying but then that one line you wrote is a superb depiction.

Posted 4 Years Ago


light and ashes

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
you have expressed so much in this tiny poem...love it! No choice here, except the consequences are the same....either way is the unknown...really nice! Fondly, Betty

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow, the fall or fly, the picture, and the quote come together to create an art piece that is beautiful. Paint's a vision.

Posted 4 Years Ago


light and ashes

4 Years Ago

Awesome :) I love hearing that.

there is a risk involved in everything we do.. it saddens me though that there is a global preoccupation with risk elimination, which is impossible and that the positive outcomes that might exist are massively overshadowed by risks negative associations... just look before you leap & if ya dont fly, make sure to bend ya knees on landing... Neville :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Neville

4 Years Ago

dont
forget
the
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light and ashes

4 Years Ago

xD I won't.
Neville

4 Years Ago


okay I was just checkin :)
Ahhh, Dear Allie 💞

I think affairs of the heart are never certain, that romance is always a brave and hopeful leap of faith into love's irresistible lure.
Well-spoken, Poetess, and the artwork is a stunningly perfect choice.

May your wings spread wide and your beautiful heart soarrr! ⁓ Richard 🍃

Posted 4 Years Ago


Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

BTW … I forgot to say how very much I've enjoyed reading many of your pieces.

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light and ashes

4 Years Ago

Awe :) you are just too sweet.
Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

As are You. ; )
Take it from me, the accident prone, clumsy, unlucky in love fool. After too many tumbles, falls and scrapes, I find it better to be safe than sorry and take off from ground level first, rather than a cliff. It hurts less is all I'm saying 😀
Taking the plunge into the unknown can be so scary biscuits, but nothing compared to regretting not taking the chance.


Posted 4 Years Ago


light and ashes

4 Years Ago

Lol thanks Lorry.
This is oh so wonderful, it's up to us if we fall or fly. Nicely said

Posted 4 Years Ago


light and ashes

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
It doesn't matter. What's important is that she finds whatever she's looking for in the "unknown" she's about to dive in.

Posted 4 Years Ago


light and ashes

4 Years Ago

Good point.... thanks for your input.
yes, sooner or later the wings with which we fly through life, do get tired...so we have to find a landing, we just hope it isn't a crash landing. And if it is, we hope to survive it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


light and ashes

4 Years Ago

Amen... thank you Jacob.
I love how this poem sums up so much of my own opinion and belief in so few lines. Youve done that so many times since we've met. It shares the only important question I have with the world. The question of are we brave enough to try? Your ability is only one of the many things I've come to love about you baby. I hope you have a wonderful night and sweet dreams.
I love you.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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