Time

Time

A Poem by light and ashes

Time is a dance back and forth between life and death.
If you can not embrace one then you can not truly embrace the other.
A season begins and ends, crashing into the next.
Winter ends then Spring begins.
The earth dies just to be reborn again like a phoenix rising from the ashes.
It is an endless cycle of time and nature.
Hold nothing too tightly.

© 2021 light and ashes


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This is really nice.
'The earth dies just to be reborn again' is a very true line.
I get the sense from your writing you are connected to your spiritual nature?

Posted 3 Years Ago


I agree dear Allie.
"It is an endless cycle of time and nature.
Hold nothing too tightly."
Men, who believe that can control nature. They learn. You cannot not. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


A great insight into the importance of not letting ourselves get too attached to fleeting things.

Posted 4 Years Ago


light and ashes

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review and for stopping by.
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Allie, you've got a boon of expressing your words neatly.
I many times failed to potray my exact thoughts on the same criteria. Now am feeling satisfied to have you writing this. True meanings are bursting within your each line, they're totally undeniable and inevitable. Amazingly penned!!♡

Posted 4 Years Ago


light and ashes

4 Years Ago

I'm not sure what a boon is... I've got a feeling that it's a typo. 😆
I've had the same ex.. read more

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Added on April 17, 2020
Last Updated on February 23, 2021


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