No Other Place

written for a man that I was in love with...thought the world of...and would have been there for.....

No Other Place

 

If I could be

Anywhere

If I could pick

Any  place

It would

Always

Be

With you

It doesn't matter

Where we

Are

It doesn't matter

All I know

Is when

I

Am

With you

There is

Comfort

Like warm

Slippers

Like beautiful

Music

Candles

That flicker

And your

Smile

As you deliver

Words that

Seems to

Come from

above

As I give

 Little

Kisses

that

Barely

Touch your

Eyebrows

And your touch

Like a

Whisper

That tells me

You care

And when I

Look into your

Eyes

I see you

Deeply

You see

I love you

And you

Really

Love me

And with

All this combined

How could

I want for

More

Where else

In the world

Would I

Rather be

For we

Have found

 happiness

A rare and

Wonderful

Thing

A dream

That only

Happens upon

A few

There is no

Other place

I would

Rather be

No matter

Where we are

Or what we do

No other place 

But

With you

Reviews

[poetic soul]

so damn sweet! and simple! and innocent! and jus so perfect......any gal would jus wanna be here of all place in the world! :) lovely creations.. the emotions are heartfelt and moving.... leaves you with a smile... :) left me with one for sure......

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Wildecat]

This is a beautiful poem, with a beautiful title. Thanks for sharing. Love this poem.

[bob, small b. aka invs]

i like the style. it gives the poem a lightness. like reading on tip toes. nicely written.

[Carey Lenehan]

Like the economy of this. A lovely sentiment well expressed and nicely paced. The layout is interesting and I'm not sure if it adds to the flow or not but the shape in the words appealed to me as I scrolled down. Nice. Well done.