LIVERPOOL RAMBLE, PART THREE--THE RHYME

Yet another dip in the 'Pool; this time in verse, I hope it's not worse...

I find myself in PENNY LANE,

Alone in a downpouring RAIN; 

Still in all, I FEEL FINE, 

Knowing that YOU'LL BE MINE 

THIS BOY hopes that YOU KNOW MY NAME.

I'm remembering, friend, THERE'S A PLACE 

Where I told you I'VE JUST SEEN A FACE;

YOU KNOW WHAT TO DO, 

BECAUSE, BABY IT'S YOU,

And SOME OTHER GUY, (just in case).

SEXY SADIE, TELL ME WHAT YOU SEE;

GIRL, SO HOW COME (NO ONE LOVES ME);

THE FOOL ON THE HILL

(Keeping perfectly still)

Will SHOUT, "GET BACK! And,"DON'T BOTHER ME!"

IF I FELL, I would CRY,BABY CRY,

And, I hope, you would please TELL ME WHY

Is it YOU WON'T SEE ME? 

I guess I'll LET IT BE;

For, OH, DARLING! You give NO REPLY...

Author's Note

Still stuck in the jukebox...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem. I like those jukebox songs. Also. I love the book "The world according to Garp". I read in 1979. Made me laugh out-loud. Thank you angel for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[angel]

Thank you for coming. You should read A PRAYER FOR OWEN MEANY, if you haven't. If you liked GARP, you'll like that one, too!

[Neville]

the FAB 4... I could listen to them eight days a week.. still do sometimes, well very nearly... FAB..

[angel]

Fab and gear, indeed;certainly not grotty...

[Neville]

Not on your nelly ....

[angel]

Isle of Whight, my friend.

[Neville]

I was lost but now I'm found..

[Chris Shaw]

It is such a treat to be reminded of all these fabulous songs angel. Takes me way back to when I was a teen and in my early twenties. Get Back one of my favourites, but everything they ever did was good. Once again you have produced a magical poem based on one of my favourite all time groups. Well done you.

Chris

[angel]

Thank you! (curtsies)

[Chris Shaw]

Applause, applause ............

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"tell me what you see"
is one of my favorite songs of theirs...had it on Beatles VI....vinyl...

"can't you see that i'm trying to get to you...open up your eyes girl, tell me what you see...it is no surprise girl, what you see is me"---