My Kitten

This is a story about my cat whom I still have.

     I would like to tell you about my kitten. She is a gray kitten with black and white stripes. She lives with me and my family. We play catch the mouse and lots of other things.

     I care for her in many ways. I bathe her eve though she doesn't like it. I brush her soft, fluffy fur. I also play with her to make her happy.

     I love her too. I really do. She is reall sweet to me. She is also really nice to strangers. She's soft, fluffy, and cuddly. I love her really, really much.

Author's Note

This is the exact way I wrote it in 3rd grade. I did not revise it.

Reviews

[Jessica]

I wish my dogs were that nice to people. They jump on them and lick them lol. I guess that's their way of saying "Hey! What do you taste like?" haha