Vanessa

A story about one of my best friends

    There is a girl named Vanessa in my class. She's really nice. She's only 9 years old and already has a job! Can you believe this, because I didn't until she showed me that 100 and some dollars. I mean that is so cool! Oh, did I mention that she is working at El Ranchito. I wish I was just like her.

Author's Note

This is the exact way I wrote it in 3rd grade. I did not revise it.

Reviews

[Jessica]

Ahahaha I went there like every time we went out when I was little! My kindergarten teacher used to eat there every thursday!