As a child

As a child

A Poem by ariel-the-little-mermaid

Remember as a child the only bad world u said was stupid
The only thing that can hurt u was a skinned up knee
The only wrong thing u could do is brake something with glass
The only bad name u can call someone was Stupid
Why cant we going back to those days
Where there wasn't worries about really anything
When u used to love going trick or treating
When dressing up was fun
When seeing family was a treat
When u enjoyed playing in the pool
You didn't have to worry about if people where talking bad about you
You didn't have to worry if your friends where talking bad about you
You thought that the opposite sex has coodies
You played on the playground all day and night if u could
But now that we are older
We have to worry about things like that
I just wish we could go back

© 2010 ariel-the-little-mermaid


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Good poem, brings back memories thinking of when i was younger lol thanks for sharing. great write :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I miss back when! Very nicely done. I'm no expert on writing, but I like the form, and the detailed memories!

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow this is deep love it..

~SK

Posted 14 Years Ago



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I am an 18 yeah old girl just in love with writing and my family and friends I have had dark things happen in my pass but that only make u stronger in my eyes more..

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