first kiss

first kiss

A Poem by ariel-the-little-mermaid
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i was 13 when i wrote this <3

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With my fluster cheeks i leaned in and kissed him 
We pull away
I'm still blushing 
I looks down
He brought my face back up to see his 
He asked my why im looking down 
I told him "im not pretty i dont see why you would kiss me"
He says to me "dear i think your really pretty you shouldnt look at your shoes" 
With my fluster cheeks i leaned and kissed his cheek 
Blushing once more 
Enjoying the rest of our night together
<3

© 2010 ariel-the-little-mermaid


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ariel-the-little-mermaid
tell me what u think please

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thank you :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


awww..cute nice..

~SK

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aw, that's cute. I truly enjoyed it. Great write :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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I am an 18 yeah old girl just in love with writing and my family and friends I have had dark things happen in my pass but that only make u stronger in my eyes more..

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