Maybe It Will Rain

Maybe It Will Rain

 

Living a life filled with love and pain,

 maybe it will rain,

 or maybe I’ll just go insane,

 whichever way you see it,

 that’s how it will be,

 no one understands you,

 more than me.

 Sometimes I get mad,

 or sad,

and I don’t know what to do,

with you.

That’s bad you see,

 because its time for you and me,

 to believe.

 That’s kind of hard,

 when you’re living with so much sorrow,

 and now you see why I want to borrow,

that cigarette I wish I could smoke,

 because sometimes that’s just how I cope.

 Understanding is believing in this life we sometimes call overworked,

 or exposed,

 and sometimes that’s just how the song goes.

 Then again is it just that you and have sinned,

 or is it just the end of an era,

 that looked to good not to begin?

                              “Angela Luye” 

Reviews

[GalaxyGhost]

If it rains, let's dance in the rain! I like the rhyme scheme to your poem and it has good rhythm to it.

[angelface79]

Thank you.

[GalaxyGhost]

You're welcome!

[JBoone]

Well written. Great imagery.

[angelface79]

Thank you!

[MelanieAnn]

This is such a pretty poem; throughout every word you get a very clear message through and the rhyming words really add a beautiful touch to the story. Wonderful job :)

[angelface79]

Thank you very much!

[Peter Rogerson]

I just hope it doesn't hail! A pleasing piece of anguished work.