STORM

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"STORM"
angelapaugh,
This was a wonderful reminder of the reality of pain and heartache in storms of life.
The fact and affirmation to the difficulties which people face is so refreshing in that we can all identify with this commonality with each other.
Line# "I'm a really bad storm and you are the ship
you are lost in the darkness, a prisoner in my grip."
As in your later line we often do feel very foolish as well.
Last line is wonderful;
"An I'm a really bad storm
but then they never last."
Great poem about this aspect of life.
blessings,
Kathy

[Coyote Poetry]

Great description of the storm. The painful and dangerous storms are never forgotten. Thank you Angela for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote