HeartBeat

I was sort of inspired by the song Stereo Hearts :) its not all that great but I thought id post it anyway haha

I feel the base in every beat

I feel the rhythm in every street 

I hear the sound from every note

The radio tunes the words we wrote.

The lyrics stand as thought to be

To you heart, I hold the key

The volumes raised up to the sky

Drowning out its every cry.

The wind whistles our lullaby 

The leaves quench its calming sighs

The music fades to you and me

As we lift our voice in harmony.

Maybe here beneath the stars,

Or near the sounds from passing cars,

Maybe if love lifted up in voice

Then every word became every choice.

We don't need the stereo

To open secret hearts to show

To every fan in every row

As if we aired on the radio.

So tune our hearts to be entwined 

So the beat won't leave us both behind.

We'll take our music, hit the street

Play every note on every sheet,

Until the rhythm hits our feet,

And our hearts, in halves, they meet,

To sing along with the melody. 

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I agree with just me, i could see that becoming a song very easily....
I really enjoyed this poem very romantic, sweet and it flowed well.
The rhymes were amazing which was great.
Had such a great story line to it.
Was definitely worth an award so congratulations!

[Just Me]

It's a very catchy piece. It sounds a lot like stereo hearts and I'm sure if this was put to some music it would make a nice song.

[amdc101]

I really liked reading this. I like that you got inspired and just wrote. Good job.

[She of Three Personalit..]

I like it. It flows really well, and makes you want to keep writing!! Great Job Victoria!!

[Quiana Shakia]

This was cute! It's almost like a song...nice :) And I agree with Midori, it is catchy!

[Midori]

wow i love it!!!!!!!! its so catchy