Real me

about people who judge you and you just seem to have to be like the type of person they say you are

The bottled up emotions the crying river flows

All the headache drama all teh messed up woes

 

never saying wrong things and always being polite

Trying to be the best and say everythings all right

 

Always being the strong one and acting liek everythings cool

Always knowing there someone out their to fool

 

They think that your so perfect they never had a doubt

never really knowing what your truly all about

 

the things they say mak it worse always having to be better

never knowing about the poems and that deppressing letter

 

I write out my feelings and all my worst regrets

hoping no one will see my darkest secret

 

I'll never be perfect i hope everyone can see

I want everyone to knwo the real true me!

Author's Note

So?? what do you think???

Reviews

[Brian K. Walters]

Grammar is important in writing yes...but the important thing is your love of writing itself. As far as the subject of your poem..... Never let people mold you into someone you are not. If you do, then that person never really loves you for who you really are do they?
Welcome to the cafe' :)

[Virellius an Fiach]

I liked it. Keep working, though. Everyone has room for improvement.

[larryb]

I liked this, you will improve with time, double check your stuff before posting for errors...:)

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

I like this. You might want to go back through and check your spelling and grammer though. It proves a good point that people always think that a person is one way and never take the time to get to know them for the real person inside. I went through this a lot in my middle and high school years. It doesn't change to much during college either. It's a great poem.

[PhoeniX]

good job. some spelling errors that can be cleaned up. nice flow and the rhyme was good.