Games

Games

A Poem by Lil*Italian*Angel*
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It's basically about a high school kid getting made fun of and tormented and she eventually is driven to cut herself and it shows the school how the things they said affected her.

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   Every breathe taken Every tear shed

Every where you turn theres mean words to be said

 

Every path followed every trail made

To somepeople your just a card waiting to be played

 

All the rumors started all the gossip spread

your lying in your room crying wishing you were dead

 

You live life to it's fullest and they say it's not enough

Then you see other people trying to act all tough

 

They call you mean name sand cause you lots of pain

And when you come to school wit slits they say you've gone insane

 

Then they try and reach out and say everythings alright

But the slits keep getting deeper to everyone in sight

 

Then you pass out in the hall you give up they've won

They all stand around and wonder Oh my gosh what have we done

 

They stand around crying and some even stare

They're getting all emotional acting like they care

 

They all go around and touch my unconsious hand

But i know they'll never truly undersatnd.

 

They don't care about anyone and they don't care why

They just stand around and wonder is she still alive

 

They don't understand they were harmless little names

I bet now they won't play their stupid little games

 

All their crying and all their tears

Now all their games cause all their worst fears

 

In a few years they won't forget

That all their games came with the worst regret

 

 

© 2008 Lil*Italian*Angel*


Author's Note

Lil*Italian*Angel*
Please be as honest about what you think I can handle constructive critisms very well. Sorry about the lack of punctuation!!!

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very well written, the rhyming was good and the message was loud and clear. great description as well, nicely done, this was very intense. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Lil*Italian*Angel*
Lil*Italian*Angel*

Earlsboro, OK



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Hey I'm 15 and I love to write! Writing poetry is my passion and my life. I'm so lucky that I have the talent to( at least everyones say i do.) Well I owe alot of it to my teachers because they tell m.. more..

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