Perfectly Of Late (lyrics)

Lyrics for a song I'm working on. This is a work in progress, so it will likely be different when it's finished, but here's a start (v, c, v, c, b, v, c)

Whipping boy so full of hope

Seems real sad to throw it back at him

Already lost when I started to choke

I never thought it'd be this easy (so easy)

Yes sir don't be late

I refuse to wait

By the garden gate

Perfectly of late

Yes sir don't be late

I'm a fool to wait

By the garden gate

Perfectly of late

Constant change embraces loss

Seems real fast although it drags real slow

Already near when I started to float

No one said it'd be this easy (so easy)

Watch me hesitate

As you contemplate

Maybe trying to fake

The purity we make

Yes sir don't you go

I refuse to know

By the garden gate

I will sit and wait

Hear me all I want is you

See there's nothing more to do

Some seething, scheming silhouette

Takes the chance, places a bet

Little more than a little more

How many times have I heard it before

Makes me want to curl up inside

No one said it'd be easy (s'not easy)

Yes sir don't be late

I refuse to wait

By the garden gate

Perfectly of late

Yes sir don't be late

I'm a fool to wait

By the garden gate

Perfectly 

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

Nicely done. would love to hear it when its done :)

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