Missing you

When you want someone but it just isn't right.

I hate not having you in my life
I know us not being together is for the best
But everytime I see you my heart aches
Things went wrong a long time ago
And it can't be fixed
I wish we had tried harder
People say everything happens for a reason
But I don't know why this had to happen
We need to be apart for now
To figure this all out and to find who we are
Maybe one day we will find our way back to each other

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Very nice, I see a strong bonding of love in your words. Yes, sometimes in relationship things wont workout but doesn't means that love was not strong. It maybe the fate! Anyways, good work keep writing...

[softlyfall]

just as an exercise in developing expressions, try rewriting this without using "I"