Left Alone

This is a poem about heart break. When you feel you have nothing left because the one you love most is gone without any warning.

You left me with nothing
You gave me know warning
Not knowing is tearing me apart
I can't pin point where it all went wrong
We were so happy together
But you have moved on
And I'm left with nothing
Things went bad so fast
And I couldn't do anything about it
I know I could change and fix us
But you won't give me a chance
I'm so alone without you
With no closure to get over you
When I know you are the only one for me

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think. Thank you

Reviews

[Dajena]

Pain, eventually takes over..

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Life is really harsh sometimes. Sometimes you lose what you love & sometimes you get what you hate...
But that's life a series of fortunate & unfortunate events...
You have described your feelings really nice. I have a small message for "Let go, Live free" it really worked for me. Wishing you a "Happy New Year Ahead" keep writing :)

[Inject Positivity]

Well i loved it......This is absolute truth for me and full of feelings.....Very well captured work....The reader will feel very emotional after reading this.....The melancholic tone of this poem is very catchy.....God bless you....Full rating....