Not Afraid

I'm not afraid

Whoosh

Ripped out of place

Screech

No time to call out

Clunk

Metal on metal

To be laid down

Blur

Whipped in circles

Still

Frozen in time

Close

Right beside

To sleep

Burnt

Worn-out rubber

Rotten

Even in foreshadowing

Iron

From the inside-out

Perchance to dream

Pain

In the headache

Pain

In my crimson makeup

Pain

In my public solitude

Goodnight

Reviews

[Siwu]

I loved how you ended it with goodnight. It creates this mysterious, dark mood. And I really liked how in each line you try to use one to three words. It leaves an impression. This was beautifully written, and a really like your choice of words!