Good Bye

I said good bye
Not in your bed;
Neither in my head.

I said good bye
When you were alive.
And alive,
You were.

So I stand here now,
To say good bye.
Not because your dead,
Lying in your bed,
'Cause your forever alive
In my head.

Author's Note

this poem is dedicated to my deceased uncle.

Reviews

[Angel Bluestocking]

oh... right! hehe~XD sorry about that, wrong spelling. thanks!!

[Jeremy Baker]

This is quite heart-wrenching. Just a small note - should 'diseased' be 'deceased'? In any case, it is a very moving piece, full of emotion.

[Dove]

My uncle passed away also and he is also alive in my head. People always tell me I have to let go and learn to move on but its hard. This is a nice poem.

[Lily Mae]

Sometimes we have to let go to gain peace of mind. xxx