Friendship

It is the definition of Friendship to me. I wrote this during our Values Ed. Back when my friend Alyssa was still alive. *This is for her and my sisters.

Friendship is a gift

That is God-given.

A promise,

Of companionship.

A hand,

That helps you through.

It is the silver lighting,

Between the darkest of days.

It is the melody sung,

By those you love.

It is hard to find,

Yet easy to treasure.

Friendship is unending.

Unending, as the sky can be.

Author's Note

what do you think; is it crappy as i think it is?
any suggestions for me to improve?

Reviews

[Dark Beauty]

Great message and good write not crappy at all hun!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Not crappy at all, but spoken with divine truth! Ecellent poem

[Adam M. Snow]

So true, it reminds me of the song "Friends" by Petra

[KAREN]

I think it's prefect just the way it is. It's full of hearfelt meaning!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

i think you poured your heart's beat into this~ it is sincere~ and lovely~

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Sweet, light and simple, most poets can't negate reason, but you state it as fact, well done, good read.

[Raquisha]

This is a very sweet poem, good job on it.

[Eric Cox]

I think it's very good. It's sweet.

[Angel Bluestocking]

Thank you! :D

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I think it is very sweet and touching love it!