Revolt

life is quite difficult when you live using your brains

Out of my heart,

grows a path,with branches of each branch,

Forced, am I to have a fate,

miseries and a long way,

A journey has begun,

My eyes blinded by the glow (light) of my Glorious One (lord)

Occurs a turn and starts the hurling of mysteries, at the sight of despair around,

Startled, am I, before the reality of this life,

Rises a query, within my mind, that have I unseen the darkness behind the light of the Luminous One( God)

Grows a rebellion against Him,

Intended, have I, to break the fold of silence,

Reward,what I get is, tears born in my eyes,

Counted, am I, among the faithless,

Unheard are the shrieks of my soul to the holiest,

Prisoner of conscience have I become,

Unaware of passing days and coming nights,

Difficult gets the journey,

Trickles the sweat from my brows,

Mysteries, as they were, remain tangled,

Failure, as I feel, unable to find the curve of the road,

Lies there a feel, making me helpless to detach the thought of watch over by the Greatest (God),

Begging, am I, to rest in peace but Unseen as It is, keeps me going,

Strikes a thought like thunder,

Chosen ,am I, just to wander,

Would I be burning in hell for the eternity

or when the soul departs, will I be opening my eyes to His beauty

baffled am I, when isolation prevails this heart.

Author's Note

more than a piece of writing , it is part of me

Reviews

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

This is a really nice spiritual poem.

[aneeqa]

Thank u for de review :)

[Matt Sayer]

I can see that this is very much a part of you, a fissure in the surface of your soul through which we glimpse confusion, oppression, desolation. Your invocation to the Lord you follow but who may not be watching stirs feelings of injustice, yet you persevere in your faith. Your thoughts are turbulent, but the message of forsaken isolation is clear. Incredibly revealing exposition. Kudos to you :)

[aneeqa]

Thnk u for de review..... :)...very nice of u