gilmore

i want to sit out

in the pouring rain

in the middle of nowhere

in a field that

you dont know about

i will be covered

by the grasses

and will write about

the thoughts in your soul

and what i think

they are trying

to tell me

the pages will become damp

and rip

and tear

and fade

and run

with every drop of rain

Reviews

[Nosce Te Ipsum]

thank you so much :)

[M. David]

Sometimes we read, or listen to, or see something that we really enjoy, but are not exactly sure why. For me, this is true of your poem. Perhaps it is because I am rather familiar with sitting in rainy fields. Either way, I like it very much, great work.