Content Within Despair

let me wash my mouth with soap

run away with my dreams

explode into the sun

spread out into the air

my particles can float to the places i dream

while i curl up in my bed and cry

Reviews

[Nosce Te Ipsum]

Thank you both so much, that means a lot to me. I actually am not too fond of the last line, any suggestions? or do you like it the way it is?

[DrSprinkz73]

This is surreal and amazing WOW
How does one review an abstract piece like this? I don't know but the only thing going through my head is my inner writer exclaiming "HOLY CRAP THIS IS GREAT!!" :)

[Geralyn Miller]

You have a knack for writing pieces most can understand or have experienced.