Where does your loyalty reside?

	What the f**k is that b*****s problem?Alis had just got back to the hideout where the brotherhood was waiting for his return.Alis paused outside the door,if the brotherhood knew he what he was doing they would kill him without hesitation,there would be no pleading for his life, no mercy at all.Alis turned around and walked back to the entrance and sat down next to the boulder(used for blocking the path)and lit a ciggerate.He had no one anymore except for the brotherhood,he had been with the invasion 20 years ago.He had taken out family's for the lust of blood,he was 250 years old,he and his old crew(all dead now)had started the invasion by killing a young boy and his family.when the brotherhood found him he was half insane mumbling about his last battle.The battle was fought in a clearing near thief riverfalls it was him and his followers that where defeated by one single girl about 13 yrs old she had nothing left because when she thought she had killed me i crawled over to where she was before we showed up and saw what had happened after that i had never been the same,i did not blame her for defending herself but the day i found her would be her last day on earth.She had killed his brother,sister,and followers and had almost killed him.Alis came back to reality and slowly got up,he walked back to the door and opened it stepping into the light and stood before his leaders.So have you managed to convince the girl to come?I am truly sorry sir you see she...she....Yes?...she was scared and i have feeling like if she came she will bring her whole arsenal and believe me we would be history.I see so you have failed your task?yes sir i am sorry....Alis put his head down and waited for the blows that would come to his face.You have two weeks to convince her or else.dismiss.

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"Alis put his head down and waited for the blows that would come to his face.You have two weeks to convince her or else.dismiss."

Um, what?