Deep Within

From deep within
my heart now spins
my life, my friends
have come to end.

through the pain, the fame
its all still the same.

I turn my head
And realize im dead.

Just a memory...
drug through from the past.
I think about it slowly.
As I move on fast.

Im scared, unaware
The stress I can't bear.

MY thoughts, my knots.
OF which i can't untie.
My feeling, my pain
of which i can't cry.

I walk away happy.
Strolling with the wind.
My life pans out.
As reality bends.

Reality sends...
me through the stress.
God helps me through it.
Therefore i am blessed.

Blessed, chosen, prayed upon, frozen.
Frozen in time...
For which i can find.

Find a way out.
Find all new friends.
God will help me.
In which my Angel he sends.

Author's Note

What do you think? Its not my normal style, i figured i would try something different.

Reviews

[Kayla_May]

this was a great write keep it up

[.Bunnie.]

I love your phrasing in this--you did a phenomenal job!! Here are a couple of my favs:

"through the pain, the fame
its all still the same.

I turn my head
And realize im dead."

Great job! Especially since it's not your normal style.