Welcome, Constant Readers.....

Random rhymes of charm personified....

First and foremost,
I'd like to welcome 
the beautiful women and distinguished gentlemen,
along with my loved ones and
of course my Constant Readers
that read what I write again and again
A shout-out of respect
to all the almost illiterate of my friends
Its not their fault that
the Public School System,
along with Society as a whole, failed them
......and I'm getting old 
so my poor vision is muddled and dense
but everything I can possibly see
is transformed into words that act 
like a camera's photographic lens,
documenting a World that quite simply
defies the reality of Kazinsky's common sense 
I know he is only a figment of my imagination,
I guess.
Real or not, the monkey with razor teeth, 
leers and grins as it clutches a Craftsman wrench
It's looking very grim and utterly hopeless because
I know that before the very near end
He'll use that tool to bash my f*****g head in.......

Drew Kazinsky
Andrew N. Farrens
West Stockton, California
April 20, 2013

Author's Note

Ayup......

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"A shout-out of respect
to all the almost illiterate of my friends
Its not their fault that
the Public School System,
along with Society as a whole, failed them"
I enjoyed the complete poem. The above lines were my favorite. You create some wild visions with your statements. Thank you for sharing the entertaining poem to read.
Coyote

[dw817]

Oww, that GREEN - =MY= vision is muddled and dense trying to read that - umm - suggest a darker green maybe ?

Not - really sure what you're saying here but the end photo shows it all. You are obviously a really nice fellow who may even be a professional hopscotch player for all I know and we can certainly find out sometime - but you definitely have a split-personality here - so I will leave you - and you - and you - alone for now to enjoy your lemon-balm flavored prussic tea ! :)

[Mark]

Another work from the master of rant! Glad you are still writing. I enjoyed even as I disagreed with the victimization : "Its not their fault that
the Public School System,
along with Society as a whole, failed them"

It IS their fault if they continue to use this as some excuse to give up. Just sayin'...

I like the 'monkey with razor teeth' reference.. your gift is definitely like that. LOL

[emmajoy]

Seems here you flew your sky and hung like grim death about an education system then, swerved into another place. At first you rake hot cinders over literacy - or not, then you glide into personal observations about one being, Kadinsky . Forgive me, I just can't find a connection. Yes, ignorant me but such fine writing needs cohesion. I'm lost..

[Astro]

Burning self-reflection, like St. Anthony's Fire.

[Mike Emil]

society hasn't failed anyone
we've all played right into it's grabby greedy hands

[Tricia O'Brien]

F-ing sick!
Love this

[Andrew N. Farrens]

Thank-you....

[gombeggar]

interesting...i dig yer voice and vocalizations here

[Andrew N. Farrens]

thanks

[Dayran]

I'm missing the charm personified but I caught the random.

[Sami Khalil]

A round of applause...Bravo...:)