I am very glad I read this. Its nice to know that there are some people out there (man and woman alike) who want to find another indiviual to share a meaningful relationship with. You poem has moved me. I hope you find your 'gorgeous woman of intelligence.'
Ever since a small youth, I have thought I'd meet the ideal woman of my most deepest dreams inside a.. read moreEver since a small youth, I have thought I'd meet the ideal woman of my most deepest dreams inside an independent, almost underground, book-store. It has yet to happen but one can hope, neh??
Than-you for the kind review....
ANF
12 Years Ago
I have dreamt the same but about meeting the man of dreams, and as of yet it hasnt happened either! .. read moreI have dreamt the same but about meeting the man of dreams, and as of yet it hasnt happened either! But, you are quite right, we can both hope.
12 Years Ago
I am glad I am not the only one out there hoping :) And dreaming!
Nice, you sounded a bit like a friend of mine in this one.
I think that you portrayed excellent thoughts in this that can be echoed in many people's hearts. Great job.
hmmm.... Looking at some other reviews I realized that I should have said more.
You sound like.. read morehmmm.... Looking at some other reviews I realized that I should have said more.
You sound like a really smart, good souled friend of mine who thinks that a smart good-hearted woman will keep him in line and they'd go through life a million times better together.
I think that is what you were talking about. I think that you portrayed that well. I think that those are feelings that you wrote into understanding, though not every man in the world feels the same. There's a bit of a celtic perspective in that type of relationship.
12 Years Ago
You "think" quite a bit, neh? LOL. Joking, of course. I appreciate the added piece of the review. It.. read moreYou "think" quite a bit, neh? LOL. Joking, of course. I appreciate the added piece of the review. It means a lot to me that folks actually take the to think about both the sensitive poetry, along with the sick and depraved stuff......Thank-you!
ANF
haha, andrew, i looked on this as a bit of humor! she is beautiful, intelligent, and she loves ME ONLY! you dreamer, you!! and if she was ,,,all that,,i doubt she would be working at the local save mart. i did enjoy the poem. and i know you would appreciate a woman's inner beauty and of course, intelligence rules. very good write!
I am very glad I read this. Its nice to know that there are some people out there (man and woman alike) who want to find another indiviual to share a meaningful relationship with. You poem has moved me. I hope you find your 'gorgeous woman of intelligence.'
Ever since a small youth, I have thought I'd meet the ideal woman of my most deepest dreams inside a.. read moreEver since a small youth, I have thought I'd meet the ideal woman of my most deepest dreams inside an independent, almost underground, book-store. It has yet to happen but one can hope, neh??
Than-you for the kind review....
ANF
12 Years Ago
I have dreamt the same but about meeting the man of dreams, and as of yet it hasnt happened either! .. read moreI have dreamt the same but about meeting the man of dreams, and as of yet it hasnt happened either! But, you are quite right, we can both hope.
12 Years Ago
I am glad I am not the only one out there hoping :) And dreaming!
Yes.. we yearn for the perfect life partner who is blend of appropriate proportions... an optimal amount of sense, sensibility, emotions and grace...When many men out there com-modifies women, you mark her as your equal - perhaps more superior... I loved the poem.. Its ideas are in harmony with what I feel my life should be like...you have done a great job.. :)
"there you go again, I was on your team, I was in the sand lot choosing sides,then you through that zinger, mean pin ball,"Jerk chicken a*s Humans" she was cute too!
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Drew Kazinsky
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Andrew N. Farrens a.k.a Drew Kazinsky is an awful, often Confused Poet/Writer/Musician/Word-Bully/Word-Slinger and many .. more..