As My Lover......

Even a White Devil gets lonely and needs the love of the woman of my dreams......if only I could find her.

As my lover,
I want a woman who is achingly beautiful

In a truly classic sense

A stunning Goddess of Kazinsky’s dreams

And this resplendent woman cannot in anyway

Be mentally confused and/or dense

In my life,
I need a woman who is pulchritudinous,

Not just for her physically ravishing beauty,

But for the very fact that she is also wickedly smart

A comely woman who can actually understand and finish

Any sort of book she might happen to start

In her life,

A damned pretty girl ruled by cool logic

But still able to listen to the secret voice of her heart

I don’t care if she is a rich lawyer

Or a poor grocery clerk

Working at the local S-Mart (Save-Mart)

As my lover,

With her undying love and unconditional loyalty,

Maybe I can learn how to fully relax

And cut y’all Jerk Chicken A*s humans a bit more slack

Which I think would be so easy to do if only

I could find a gorgeous woman of intelligence

who loves me back……

Res Ipsa Loquitur

Andrew N. Farrens

Drew Kazinsky
West Stockton, California

September 30, 2012

Author's Note

This is what Kazinsky would call a "quick-rhyme"......Indeed.
I hope you enjoy!

Reviews

[Hester Vane]

I am very glad I read this. Its nice to know that there are some people out there (man and woman alike) who want to find another indiviual to share a meaningful relationship with. You poem has moved me. I hope you find your 'gorgeous woman of intelligence.'

[Andrew N. Farrens]

Ever since a small youth, I have thought I'd meet the ideal woman of my most deepest dreams inside an independent, almost underground, book-store. It has yet to happen but one can hope, neh??
Than-you for the kind review....
ANF

[Hester Vane]

I have dreamt the same but about meeting the man of dreams, and as of yet it hasnt happened either! But, you are quite right, we can both hope.

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

I am glad I am not the only one out there hoping :) And dreaming!

[Eddie Phillips]

I enjoyed your intellectual ability to weave multifarious words in your poem with great ease. You are a wordsmith that deserves to be read and a poet that can express himself with confidence and virtuosity.

[Tricia O'Brien]

This is wicked dope. I dig for sure
Trish-

[emmajoy]

So many fine phrases, but for me the smile echoes these words: '' .. A comely woman who can actually understand and finish ~ Any sort of book she might happen to start In her life, ~ '
There's quite a hugger-mugger of emotions in this, a touch or more of wit, a metaphorical serving of thought-dreams, plus, a lure deftly wrapped in more than fine writing!

You add, ' i hope you enjoy..' 'hope's always the best route to finding anything or anybody!

[Southern Cross]

My first piece that I have read of yours and find it quite appealing. It flowed with rhythm while expressing a tender heart. I have added your friend request, as I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

[Andrew N. Farrens]

thank-you......you will likely dislike some of my other stuff.

[Mia]

Fingers crossed, you find her sooner rather than later :)

[Claire Twinn]

I like your hope and humour here. The last two verses seem realistic but perhaps you're setting your sights too high with the first two!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire in the poem. Good to want a woman who will make you happy. Happiness is the goal of two people. Ain't easy. Can be found if we are lucky. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Soul Fire]

Wow, this is lovely and beautifully written. Excellent work! It's so heartfelt, your really opening up in this piece. So honest, and you can really tell that it's coming from your soul.. So wonderful! I really hope that you find that special someone,and I know you will. I've found mine.

[The Random Writings Of ..]

I being a woman search for the same in a man - but have lost my only love... The only part of your piece i take up issue with is -
"And this resplendent woman cannot in anyway
Be mentally confused and/or dense"
Let me explain myself - there are many woman who are mentally confused, and as someone pointed out below, the way to a woman heart is her soul.
You have expressed beautifully that unconditional love and being with someone you can be yourself around is of importance. Well I think you will find that beauty comes from within. I have found the most attractive men to be the most arrogant and rude (not saying all are like this). But true love does not come easy. Loyalty and love do not come over night - but with time. I truly relate to your piece and I don't want you to take offence to what I have said here. Only speaking from a woman's point of view. We all want that love - or those of us who have not found it. Beautiful write :) Thank you for sharing your feelings.

[Andrew N. Farrens]

No offense and I'm glad I'm not attractive but that arrogance is still there, only with my word-craft........

[Andrew N. Farrens]

lol

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

I didn't mean you weren't attractive... I was speaking in general :)
In any case this is a very good write and as Hester Vane pointed out, it is great to know there are others out there searching - and yes I too hope you find the woman of your dreams :)

[Dayran]

Way to go Andrew! I think its important to come out and say something like this for our own individual sake. It helps to verbalize the feelings of love we experience within but are not able to find expression for them.

However, in the physical expression of the experience you might find several defects ..... relatives being one of them .... but if you can see past that you got it made.