Freedom Songs of the Doomed

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Freedom Songs of the Doomed

So here’s Kazinsky with another rhyme

Can’t seem to get my mind

Out of the gutters of the two-oh-nine (209)

I think my continued misery

Is a positive sign

That it is salvation I must seek

But never find

Its okay, I understand

I wanna make a hundred dollars

Into a hundred grand

And it certainly wouldn’t be

Done by any legal means

Imagine something out of Movie Scenes

The only way to get tax free cash

Is by moving things

And what does that mean anymore?

Because when the s**t hits the fan hardcore

The almighty dollar won’t mean

A damn thing no more

Maybe One Day, Big Brother will want to arrest me

For the words I write

Under the name of Drew Kazinsky

I must be a schizoid cause the voices whisper:

They are all out to get ME

I hope I’m not dead in a few years

But my dreams are starting to convince me

I need to write more words because

I believe One of the Gods have sent me

To write these Doomed Songs of Freedom

And escape the material greed, men

Of a evil nature put before our Eyes

But Now I See Them And

Wish to rip off the disguise

And bring them the misery they deserve

For deceiving us with their lies

It’s the weight of this Responsibility

That makes me get so f*****g high

So now you know why

.A.N.F.

Drew Kazinsky

12/14/08

Oakland, Ca

Reviews

[Ees]

My favorite part:
"I think my continued misery
Is a positive sign"-
I just love that!

Haha, I'm convinced that the government is out to get me too! I don't think we're paranoid schizophrenics, I think we're on to something. We don't trust the government and the government doesn't trust its people!

The weight of the responsibility gets you high? Interesting concept and great use of words, I like it.

[David Scott]

Clever use of this personality you have created. Well done.
Be Well

[Mia]

This is superb, I loved this. It's real. So many people are blind to what is happening...blind and naive. It's nice that you're neither and even more so that you write about it.

[Andrew N. Farrens]

Thanks.........

[Coyote Poetry]

Old world had lost control. Too much money wasted on the wrong things. Doomed day may be coming. But I believe most folks don't see a lot of opportunity. Need the old ways. Lock up the budget and people must help each other. When I was young. I thought I died young and do something great. Today a old man with grandchildren wished he did more. Good questions raised up in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Andrew N. Farrens]

thanks, and I really appreciate the involved review. I enjoy it when folks use their past experiences to relate to some rhyme I wrote, especially when said rhyme was very quickly written, under an alleged deadline in a recording booth that never happened because my "?producer", if you can call him that, was drunk and on cocaine, and obsessed with the sound of the snare drum..........but I digress, which seems to have become a filthy habit as of late. I just wanted you to know why I was so appreciative of you're review. SELAH.
ANF

[Mark]

The more the government creates, the less the dollar means. it's coming, because the only solution they have to the problem created is to do exactly what caused the problem in the first place.

[Andrew N. Farrens]

Heya, thanks, Mark. I was going to write a really cool reply but alas; as I grabbed the indifferent key-board, the cord caught on a small glass container filled with "medicinal herbs" and I guess the top was not screwed on tightly enough so all that wonderful green medicine spilled upon the floor. I was able to rescue most of it but tragically, dog hair stuck all over those gleaming trichomes..........oh well, just like the reddish hair on top of my head, more can be grown for my enjoyment. Thanks, man, for the review.
.A.N.F.
Kazinskyville Kazinskyness

[Mark]

damn, hate to see that stuff wasted! Keep on brother, you got a talent and you got guts. Great combination to have.

[lee von cleef]

How about a sound or a smell or a anthology of the sun or the son.

[mandy]

i can't identify, but a nice write.

[de_maruf]

valo