Encanto (Enchantment)

This is a really simple poem, but I like it though. It is particular because most of it is written in the Portuguese language, but there are also parts in Spanish, Romanian and Italian.

Olhar na direção que

meu coração

me sugiere com tanto

sentimento y desiderio. 

Você é tão linda, e compari

sull’orizzonte cupo ma 

sereno. Me gritas:

“Îmi încânți!”

Nunca sentí em vida

minha uma voz

como la que tu,

draga mea, avevi.

Mai alguém me

regaló muitas emoções,

só com dois palavras.

Foi a primeira,

şi não lo esquecerei.

Jamais.

ENGLISH TRANSLATION:

[Looking toward the direction that my heart suggests with so much feeling and desire. You're really beautiful and you appear on the dark but clear horizon. You scream to me: "(You) enchant me". Never heard in my whole life such a voice like the one that you, my darling, used to have. Never had someone that gave to me such these emotions, just with two words. You had been the first, and I'll never ever forget it. Ever.]

Reviews

[M. Corrigan]

This is also very nice, I like the way you have used several languages. These are things that people from all places experience.