It ain't November, when you're not mine.

It ain't November, when you're not mine.

A Poem by andreii93
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My second poem written in English. It dates back to November 1st, 2011.

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I can walk all the way long,
thinking about what I wish us to be.

But I just can’t figure out the reason why we don’t belong,
cause it all looks like a song, as far as I actually can see.

You’re everything I’ve ever dreamt of,
and you know it better than I do,
cause everything is love,
and what I am, I just owe it to you.

It ain’t November, when you’re not mine.
It ain’t the same, when I’m alone all the time.
Like a shelter you make me secure,
like a compass you lead me to you.
It ain’t November, when you’re not mine.
It ain’t the same, when I feel alone all the time.

But then you come, and everything gets better. Always.

© 2012 andreii93


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Mia
This is very sweet and I can't believe this is your second poem in English. When English is your first language, you think in it and so it's easier to put your thoughts down without having to translate it. I really applaud you for the extra work you do! Wonderful write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


andreii93

12 Years Ago

Thanks :) I appreciate this :)
This is a cute poem. I think it was well written actually. It has a nice flow to it. :) keep up the good work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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andreii93

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)

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andreii93
andreii93

Milan, Italy



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Andrea, 18 yrs old. I'm a fairly laid-back Italian guy who dreams of a better world. I don't claim myself to be a poet, nor I want to be considered a writer. I'm just a guy who enjoys writing. more..

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