Take off. The mask.

Take off the shadows Of our past And let them fall Into the abyss Of time The mask you're wearing Is hiding the tears Your soul is willing To cry Take off and fly with me Into a future of our own Take off the mask And show yourself To me

Reviews

[G!o]

Lovely, short and intriguing....nice writing

[Chemical Kitten]

Lovely poem. You've covered a interesting concept and portrayed your feelings well. The last stanza is a powerful ending.